This is very adorable! It's super sweet and cuddle and fluffy!
Lighting This is lineless, although some shadows aren't defined enough to make the total image clear, so it's lost a bit of it's shape here and there. Also, there's shadows all over the place. There some underneath, some on the right edges of things, some on the left edges and this makes your light source unclear. The shine in the eyes shows which direction you meant for it to be coming, but some of your shadows contradict this. It's an easy thing to fix! The shading on the scarf is lovely, though!
Anatomy It's excellent, actually! Everything fits perfectly in the cartoony style this is made in. The only minor problem I can see is the back feet. They tilt in towards the front legs and look a wee bit awkward, like the bone inside is curved instead of straight. Back legs are something a lot of people struggle with though, so don't fret!
This is amazing. ;^; I love your pixel work so much I could die. The little scarfattachment to her bellcollar was a brilliant idea. ;w; And those eyes and everything is just so perfect uhguhguhg thank you so much ;o; thankyou thank you <3 <3
It's super sweet and cuddle and fluffy!
This is lineless, although some shadows aren't defined enough to make the total image clear, so it's lost a bit of it's shape here and there. Also, there's shadows all over the place. There some underneath, some on the right edges of things, some on the left edges and this makes your light source unclear. The shine in the eyes shows which direction you meant for it to be coming, but some of your shadows contradict this. It's an easy thing to fix! The shading on the scarf is lovely, though!
It's excellent, actually! Everything fits perfectly in the cartoony style this is made in. The only minor problem I can see is the back feet. They tilt in towards the front legs and look a wee bit awkward, like the bone inside is curved instead of straight. Back legs are something a lot of people struggle with though, so don't fret!
Great job! Keep up the good work!
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